what is it that makes night so appealing?
i should be long asleep by now. instead - i'm feeling.
reflecting the shadows on the walls. chat noir on the poster above. music on.
something's gone wrong with my lung today, it still hurts when i breathe.
i don't know how things happen to me. they just do.
and it's not that i don't like daytime, only that -
sunrise comes too soon
i should be long asleep by now. instead - i'm feeling.
reflecting the shadows on the walls. chat noir on the poster above. music on.
something's gone wrong with my lung today, it still hurts when i breathe.
i don't know how things happen to me. they just do.
and it's not that i don't like daytime, only that -
sunrise comes too soon
Like this a lot, well done.
ReplyDeletethank you. your ability to understand and value teenage polish is impressive, i must admit (;
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ReplyDeleteActually I don't speak Polish. To be honest I mostly just really liked the line:
ReplyDelete'and it's not that i don't like daytime, only that-
sunrise comes too soon'
Peace.
well, i've always regarded men who can make women laugh as quite clever - it's no easy task, and something you've just achieved - thank you for that. it's dusky & coily over here.
ReplyDeletethere's a relief in this oh-holy-misunderstanding fact as i find the text on the picture graphomanic and, well, teenage. i'd rather you didn't appreciate it, whatever the reason, because i don't find much in it either. i still like the ideas of my 20-year-old mind though even though the form is pathetic.
now my turn for a disappointment: sunrise comes too soon is a title of late night alumni's song. that evening was spun around it. that's how i live - i have a stave threaded alongside my spine. without music, i would never write anything, draw anything, remember anything. glad you liked the passage though.
not getting the right idea is very ok. no mistake - no learning. in the end your conclusion was correct. sorry for the panic, i can speak in a confusing way. and then weird - what does it mean, really? for me it only equals a word you've already used: genuine.
it's flattering, and thank you ^2, and gives a funny feeling to be called clever when you in the very realest real - know nothing.
Oh... you saw the now-deleted comment. I started regretting posting it like 5 minutes after I posted it, that's how that usually works I guess.
ReplyDeleteNow it looks ridiculous up there, my bad.
I'm very glad to have made you laugh. I don't mind that you got the line(or half of it) from a song. You thought to put it there. That's good enough.
I both like and dislike that you say you know nothing. I guess it's because I'm of the mind that if you're aware that you know nothing you're already more clever than most people, or something.
yes, i'm a ninja. this black background hides me well.
ReplyDeletebe calm. i know this mechanism very well myself. nothing to feel ridiculous for.
i see what you mean. i had a little different knowledge in mind - not the one realizing facts but the one realizing how they interconnect, act, exist. you can move there by intuition, that's what i mostly do. but we live in a dissonant world.
This is getting pretty philosophical pretty quickly. I feel out of my element. Maybe you would say we all are, or that none of us are.
ReplyDeleteYou sound brave.
i am.
ReplyDeletewhich doesn't give me too long a future ahead ;) problem of retirement out of my head, at least.
I... am unsure on how to take that, are you being literal? I did read what you said about your spine, I didn't want to ask about it as it might have been too personal.
ReplyDeletei am literal about being brave and that this feature can easily shorten your life.
ReplyDeletestave was a metaphor. stave meaning the five lines on which you note music.
everything about this place is personal.
Jesus, I thought you had like a surgery thing or something, god damnit. I'm an idiot, sorry. I got really worried though, because it seemed like a metaphor, but I wasn't sure. Jeez. English isn't my first language, I just took it for like a metal rod or something. I am relieved and embarrassed. But I'm sure you won't mind.
ReplyDeletei don't ;) english is a foreign language for me too, an oversight can lie on either side. so it's not your english, it's just the curse/blessing of polysemy.
ReplyDeleteI promise I didn't google polysemy.
ReplyDeleteHey, I found this blog because of your account on goodreads, would you mind it terribly if I friended you on there?
haha... you score, google-free being.
ReplyDeletesure, go on. never met anyone new through that place yet.